tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post8100284191997810778..comments2024-02-14T15:27:59.577-05:00Comments on Bukowski's Basement: OVER A HAMBURGER (poem & podcast)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-33345307691820353892010-08-23T22:25:46.003-04:002010-08-23T22:25:46.003-04:00The repitious and haunting guitar strum in the bac...The repitious and haunting guitar strum in the background really captures the mood of this slice of life prose poem. The simple honesty of it appeals to me a great deal. I've read this one before and I don't know if it was in your archive or if I stumbled across it in an ezine, but I remember it and that says something, because had I not enjoyed it - I would have forgotten it completely. Good job, Anthony.Paula Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03315919140323364702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-12043783034971520832010-08-23T20:04:15.438-04:002010-08-23T20:04:15.438-04:00Anthony - very cool. It's one thing for my eye...Anthony - very cool. It's one thing for my eyes to read it. Quite another to hear the one who penned the words speak them. Personal. Sexy.RaShelle Workmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582252557500502186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-50202879140325087212010-08-23T02:06:45.275-04:002010-08-23T02:06:45.275-04:00Slice of life with a side of real.Slice of life with a side of real.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-72174400241007329192010-08-23T01:51:24.907-04:002010-08-23T01:51:24.907-04:00Hey Ant, followed your link here from Spoken Sunda...Hey Ant, followed your link here from Spoken Sunday...<br />Paul Brazill said it best 9 months ago...you really are good at this!!! Glad I caught it!Crybbe666https://www.blogger.com/profile/14752123812270914073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-80847338573112371472009-12-14T18:03:58.730-05:002009-12-14T18:03:58.730-05:00oops, I did it again.
Jeanette Cheezumoops, I did it again.<br />Jeanette CheezumAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-9127812497293094762009-12-14T18:02:12.731-05:002009-12-14T18:02:12.731-05:00Sorry, I'm late. I've been away. This is a...Sorry, I'm late. I've been away. This is a great prose poem. <br /><br />I like Madam Z's comments. <br /><br />I could not here the audio. I'm not sure why.I cranked everything up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-23846479819186501112009-12-11T11:12:37.774-05:002009-12-11T11:12:37.774-05:00I'm late here, but as always, am glad I stoppe...I'm late here, but as always, am glad I stopped by to catch this one. Those uncomfortable relationship moments...and the oddities that encompass them - excellent!EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-35973925494509848692009-12-09T09:30:26.343-05:002009-12-09T09:30:26.343-05:00Love the audio!
So quit peeking into my life would...Love the audio!<br />So quit peeking into my life would ya!<br /><br />Once a week I experience this not a u.s. diner but over a bad Skype connection, "I been doin a LOT of thinking and . . . n't feel rig. . . u'r a guy of my drea . problms not y . . ut the distan. . . jst don' . .. . see how I ca. . . mke this . .yu'r so youn' . . .u take, i giv. . . am runnin on emp . . ."<br /><br />Yeah . . . every week. Hard to let go when all that is wrong is the timing.<br /><br />Thanks for a great poem!Vicki Nikolaidishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09827323193327461538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-18466818543752888722009-12-08T18:16:58.411-05:002009-12-08T18:16:58.411-05:00Oh, I think Madam Z is on to something. ;p
This p...Oh, I think Madam Z is on to something. ;p<br /><br />This prose is sketched like an oil painting in my mind. I see a diner, two sullen people trying to pretend nothing is wrong when everything is wrong. The hamburger gives it a sense of normalcy.<br /><br />Another fantastic write and audio. Thank you, Anthony.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-43565697091187164442009-12-07T20:31:32.070-05:002009-12-07T20:31:32.070-05:00Next time, try some lasagna with lots of gooey, me...Next time, try some lasagna with lots of gooey, melted cheese and a nice red wine. She'll talk, honey...she'll talk. And so will you, and your headache will go away and you'll both lick your lips a lot and look into each other's eyes. You'll get somewhere, I promise.Madam Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00136166772469538966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-73752559990158030132009-12-07T18:53:53.042-05:002009-12-07T18:53:53.042-05:00Another BB classic audio prose poem. "I'v...Another BB classic audio prose poem. "I've been doing a lot of thinking..." -- argh! I'd say he should just cut to the chase, neck the beer, and start on the whiskey.Barry J. Northernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12078136594892291058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-33911825566357621602009-12-07T18:29:34.524-05:002009-12-07T18:29:34.524-05:00It's working just fine...It's working just fine...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-2948654332876533712009-12-07T18:19:17.577-05:002009-12-07T18:19:17.577-05:00My audio's not working!!! Can I request a per...My audio's not working!!! Can I request a personal reading?Alliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16688259930865787451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-16975347962201661832009-12-07T00:17:45.066-05:002009-12-07T00:17:45.066-05:00Magical stuff Anthony, you are surely an enlighten...Magical stuff Anthony, you are surely an enlightened creativist.<br />PorlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-61750376296968956802009-12-06T08:42:29.007-05:002009-12-06T08:42:29.007-05:00Damn. I love your prose poems and now you've ...Damn. I love your prose poems and now you've gone and added another awesome layer - the audio recordings. I can picture this scene perfectly.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.com