tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post4647941398018343563..comments2024-02-14T15:27:59.577-05:00Comments on Bukowski's Basement: EARTH ANGEL (#fridayflash)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-47255386184403347192012-07-01T03:00:41.257-04:002012-07-01T03:00:41.257-04:00Dark and gritty - Nice one!Dark and gritty - Nice one!Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-28831337455168785852012-06-29T15:19:10.396-04:002012-06-29T15:19:10.396-04:00Killer first line, brother!Killer first line, brother!Al K Hallhttp://thebarnone.menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-88689338095455667752012-06-24T23:11:55.699-04:002012-06-24T23:11:55.699-04:00Great voice and a wicked closing paragraph. Nice o...Great voice and a wicked closing paragraph. Nice one.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-47610707573782075942012-06-24T23:10:52.069-04:002012-06-24T23:10:52.069-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-63250233366871081812012-06-23T23:37:05.891-04:002012-06-23T23:37:05.891-04:00Great story! That last sentence/paragraph really b...Great story! That last sentence/paragraph really brings the chills.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-71083680635716872092012-06-22T17:23:40.247-04:002012-06-22T17:23:40.247-04:00A great dark story, great turns of phrase and imag...A great dark story, great turns of phrase and images :)Casey Douglasshttp://caseydouglass.blogspot.co.uk/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-60528348245085676252012-06-22T11:56:18.258-04:002012-06-22T11:56:18.258-04:00You've still got that strength for phrasing, A...You've still got that strength for phrasing, Anthony, that maybe only the pulps have.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-83473689231533618332012-06-22T03:08:02.764-04:002012-06-22T03:08:02.764-04:00Easy reading over Wheaties...Easy reading over Wheaties...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-68711697003103497982012-06-22T03:07:36.353-04:002012-06-22T03:07:36.353-04:00Thanks for pointing out a few of those. The perils...Thanks for pointing out a few of those. The perils of scribbling in the wee hours. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-31197523503675658002012-06-22T02:57:55.453-04:002012-06-22T02:57:55.453-04:00I really like stiff like this ... wicked. Anyway -...I really like stiff like this ... wicked. Anyway - picked up the following things you might wanna look at :-) <br /><br /><br />Paragraph 2 - “ It was easy for people like us for fall - should it not be too fall ? <br />Paragraph 3 - it really didn’t matter which - you can drop the word - which.<br />Wink my wink - nice usage but editors would most likely tell you to just stick with one win, it means the same. <br />I felt snakebit - should it not be snake bitten <br /><br />keep on going :-)M.Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03769293241767403396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-29028426835431236622012-06-22T02:38:35.832-04:002012-06-22T02:38:35.832-04:00Ohhh very Dark story before taking kids to school!...Ohhh very Dark story before taking kids to school!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00398872718646932305noreply@blogger.com