tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post2159324811365963229..comments2024-02-14T15:27:59.577-05:00Comments on Bukowski's Basement: LOVE IN PINE VALLEY (flash fiction)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-40195583670860739592010-02-24T16:28:03.950-05:002010-02-24T16:28:03.950-05:00Another flash, bang, wallop of a last line. Nice s...Another flash, bang, wallop of a last line. Nice setting too. I like your settings.Barry J. Northernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12078136594892291058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-60808248514781239952010-02-23T00:52:17.528-05:002010-02-23T00:52:17.528-05:00Yes, the matter of fact ending, so cool. Your fla...Yes, the matter of fact ending, so cool. Your flash has style.peggyhttp://pegjet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-86478872444679207562010-02-21T11:26:17.079-05:002010-02-21T11:26:17.079-05:00Excellent! Love what Laurita wrote ("cranked...Excellent! Love what Laurita wrote ("cranked up the creep factor") - that nails it best for me. Short, descriptive, tight, and concise. Well done!<br />KMKevin Michaelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00703125974467675009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-65924375182773918622010-02-20T20:41:15.522-05:002010-02-20T20:41:15.522-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-78132620330738929432010-02-20T13:28:08.299-05:002010-02-20T13:28:08.299-05:00Love the matter-of-fact tone at the end!Love the matter-of-fact tone at the end!mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-66424259988637825712010-02-19T20:45:59.034-05:002010-02-19T20:45:59.034-05:00Ha! Loved the ending. Creepy in the best way. Peac...Ha! Loved the ending. Creepy in the best way. Peace, LindaLindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-83031022648973551662010-02-19T15:08:58.643-05:002010-02-19T15:08:58.643-05:00Now that was a piece of flash! Well done Ant. It i...Now that was a piece of flash! Well done Ant. It is "corned" beef by the way, a pickling process involving soaking the brisket in brine.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-48429329222844209962010-02-19T11:38:28.701-05:002010-02-19T11:38:28.701-05:00There is an Edgar in every bar, but hey, with a na...There is an Edgar in every bar, but hey, with a name like Edna, what could the broad really expect?<br />Dom Pérignon and truffles? Uh-Hu, not from Edgar.EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-58442526950739851652010-02-19T11:11:58.247-05:002010-02-19T11:11:58.247-05:00You really cranked up the the creep factor on this...You really cranked up the the creep factor on this one. I think I've known a few Edgars. Great job, as always, Anthony.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-42037858586665828162010-02-19T04:18:59.487-05:002010-02-19T04:18:59.487-05:00you are wicked. i'm surprised edna didn't...you are wicked. i'm surprised edna didn't wear 'evening in paris'...quin brownehttp://www.quinbrowne-words.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-59299780048531611952010-02-19T04:14:26.396-05:002010-02-19T04:14:26.396-05:00Nothing worse than missing the start of a 'fli...Nothing worse than missing the start of a 'flick', especially 'cos of a woman. ;-)<br />Great piece as usual, Anthony.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-29229443448926394102010-02-19T02:18:09.671-05:002010-02-19T02:18:09.671-05:00You would have thought she would have picked a bet...You would have thought she would have picked a better place to watch the film from. Maybe she didn't like Cagney...what? Ohhhh...now I see!!<br />Love this sharp piece, Anthony. A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.Crybbe666https://www.blogger.com/profile/14752123812270914073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-29431451170120223162010-02-19T01:29:04.209-05:002010-02-19T01:29:04.209-05:00Aww. Poor Edna. Better she shoulda put out a litt...Aww. Poor Edna. Better she shoulda put out a little, you know? Can't expect a guy to live on coffee alone.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7475969042192089612.post-76036776445596103802010-02-19T00:29:47.918-05:002010-02-19T00:29:47.918-05:00Now that's persistence! Press on fine writer, ...Now that's persistence! Press on fine writer, press on.Danielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16480047895970191126noreply@blogger.com